G0ldenfire357's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bowing]

If I'm being honest, I'm not very good at giving criticism(especially since my art ain't that great either and idk this game). But pretty much the only noticeable criticism points is that there needs to be shadows under the characters since there is a prominent light source(unless these characters are dead then no shadow is a great way to show that). And the shadows you HAVE made were done by airbrush I see. This COULD work, but maybe try using more solid brushes like Love Pen or whatever.
Another thing is that the figure on the right doesn't really look like it's bowing exactly. It instead looks like it's about to jump off of that rock. I recommend keeping the legs straight while the upper body bends. Or just look at a reference. Yeah. use references.

Other than that, I really like how you drew the grass! And their clothes look fine, along with the characters themselves. I'm not gonna criticize the hands & feet because I like drawing like that also, as you can see in my artworks lol

PS: It said you fixed a bunch of clouds but I don't see them???
PPS: GODDAMN 166 LAYERS?! Did you make a layer for each brush stroke or something? And all in 3 days? Your speed impresses me. ToT

Zakeblue1 responds:

thank you for the feedback!!!. and yes it's like the character is jumping but trying to bow for the first time. it was kind of hard to do so but I did made that for fun. also I didn't think about the shadow for the characters since it's more like a night time? but I'll think about it. probably need to work on that too for future projects.

and yeah that 166 layers are the shading, color, lightning. Also oldsketch/sketch too. I guess I like making it more.

[Sandwich Collab]

Surprisingly I wasn't blown with notifications this time. This is some "Where's Waldo?" type shi because it took me 3 minutes to find mine lol

[the day collab entry!!]

Lol I read this in Applejack's voice. Also Happy Birthday and Valentine's Day! :D

mihar34 responds:

thank you! ❤

[Gogo's Collab 2023]

oooooooo so this was how it was gonna look like in the end, love it! :D
(btw I'm the Blue Gat at the left, next to the human's right shoe)

[The Boner Collab (Part 1)]

If I'm being honest I'm not proud of mine because I forget some skeletons and some of em just look cringe. But at least I could contribute to this collab and at least do something for Halloween :)

[It'll be alright (Comic)]

Went from wholesome to hilarious real quick lol🤣

[hold the line]

This makes me sad😭😭😭. What if they never revive the show??? :(

seasaltcosmos responds:

not if the fandom has anything to say about it 😈

[rottmnt/ttgl parody art]

This surprisingly matches lol

[Turtles]

BRUH I WAS JUST THINKING ABOUT THIS SHOW AND IT POPPED UPPPPP

Susie-ruu responds:

Surprise (: It should totally pop up more its a GOOD show

The style is also just a ton of fun to imitate!

[Kid Cosmic]

YESSSS KID COSMIC!!!